My aims in 2018
My aims in 2018 (outline)
- Introduction: achievements
- Topic sentence: In 2018, I want to achieve more than last year.
- Thesis: what needs to be done
- Support 1: fail less subject
- Support 2: more time spent with learning
- Support 3: more "treat yourself" day
- Conclusion: more time spent indoors
In 2018, I want to
achieve more than last year, and therefore, I aim to finish this year with
complete success. To do that, several changes need to be made. First of all, my
first year at university should be successful, which means there should not be
more failed subjects. That is achievable with more time spent with learning.
However, it would only be possible if I met less with my friends. Also, another
change that would make my goals more achievable is the fact that I need to
spend more time on myself, since I am a loner. This is a personality trait which
requires isolation, because any social activity or contact causes stress.
Therefore, it is not relaxing to spend time with my friends; what is more, it
makes me furious. That is because I think about the time I could have spent on
myself, which could have been more relaxing since it is my free time. After an
exhausting bout of socialization, which causes furiousness and tiredness, I will
not feel like studying, or if I do, I will be more stressed about how much I
need to learn in a short time. All in all, I need to spend more time indoors,
and I need to focus on myself and my needs, so studying will be more fun.
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